summer learning jurney

kia ora my name is obe from weasly primary school in room 6 and miss gregen is teaching us to write a letter about how the people from a i land came to new zeland and here is my story.
 once upona time 5 sarmon people was very lonley so they dasited they want to move to a nother land so they hoped on there waka and set sale after 5 days a big storm came it was very windy then all there food blow away so they grabed there spers and went fishing then thay kiled a small fish in the water so the sharks can come after 10 minuts a grate white shark came so the 5 saroms staped and trow there spears it toke 1 hour to kill the shark then they kiled it and toke it a borde and after a weak thay found a land so they went fast to the land and they where very scerd of the mori. to be contented....